final
Posted by benmc on May 22, 2009
Ben McNulty
5/22/09
Ms. Pomerantz
1st block
Our documentary on sustainable living was shown as its final product today. I thought that everyone’s documentary was good but, there were parts that did not go well. But every segment got its point across in a different way but, some of them weren’t seen as easily as others.
The documentary had a lot of information that was interesting to hear but, in the end, I don’t feel that it would persuade anyone that did not live sustainably to live sustainably. There were many aspects of information that could have changed their life style if they did not live sustainably before. I felt that the documentary would not have persuaded anyone into living sustainably. Since, it did not persuade people to change it would not affect change to those that the film was targeted to. The information given in the film was interesting, but it wasn’t focused to where it was supposed to be focused at.
The film had many things that went wrong. Even though it was not persuading, would not affect change to those that the film was targeted to. The information given in the film was interesting, but it wasn’t focused to where it was supposed to be focused at. There were many good parts of the film that I liked. The interviews went well. They were straight forward and focused enough to know what they were trying to say. My favorite thing about the documentary the ending of the “what are the effects on the environment group”. They explained why people think selfishly and, why people might not want to change unless there’s benefit from it. I believe that this group did the best out of all of the other groups. Also the still images went well with the documentary.
The documentary had a lot of information that was interesting to hear but, in the end, I don’t feel that it would persuade anyone that did not live sustainably to live sustainably. There were many aspects of information that could have changed their life style if they did not live sustainably before. I felt that the documentary would not have persuaded anyone into living sustainably. Since, it did not persuade people to change it would not affect change to those that the film was targeted to. The information given in the film was interesting, but it wasn’t focused to where it was supposed to be focused at.
The film had many things that went wrong. Even though it was not persuading, the film’s visual metaphors looked well planned, but in places, they didn’t make any sense because it wasn’t explained like it should have been. Like the visual metaphor of the “Why Should We Care Group”. When I saw it, I was thinking that it didn’t make any sense. But my group and I thought that it did because we knew what the message was, to live more sustainably, instead of using so many resources. But when I see it in the eyes of the audience, it didn’t make any sense. This was because they didn’t understand the message because we didn’t make it easier to understand. Also, the music didn’t match the mood of the documentary. This was because we didn’t have the resources to get better music for the documentary. Also, the editing had many slip ups. For example, in some places, when there was supposed to be narration, there wasn’t until after the thing being narrated was past, which made the narration go over something that wasn’t narrated.
There were many things that I learned during the time of this project. I leaned that making a film/documentary takes a lot of work that takes up even more time. Also, research on a topic is even harder to do. I had never blogged before, and if I did it was for very little time. Since the over half the project was finding article, reading them, and blogging about the articles, I learned more than I had anticipated about blogging. Since I work with others in most of my classes, I learned that not everyone will agree or think the same way you think. Everybody has their own opinion that may not agree with your opinion. Also, to get things done in a group you need to work together.
I did like this project, but I didn’t like the topic at all. My group worked hard on our documentary, especially brad. He did the most and, he worked the hardest, but it was a group effort and I think that we all did well.
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